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        Dib wasn't worried when the little green alien didn't show up for school the next day…or the day after that…or the day after that. He just thought the insane alien was working on his latest plan to conquer earth. Of course he wasn't worried at all, that was a feeling he reserved for people he cared about. But then why did he have a feeling something bad had happened?

        The mysterious phone call he'd received late that Tuesday wasn't helping with his suspicions. The irken had sounded broken when he'd hung up, almost on the verge of crying; but Irkens didn't cry. He'd never even seen the irken sad or close to being unoptimistic.

       Dib gave out a loud sigh, which amazingly went unnoticed by the teacher, and stared at the clock. Ten more minutes and he'd go to Zim's house. He'd vowed to himself that he'd check on Zim today. Not that he was worried or anything it was just an unspoken rule.  If one of them was gone for four days the other had all right to bust into the house and demand answers, I guess you could say it was like a checks and balance thing to make sure the other hadn't finally figured out a way to win.

       The second hand ticked away torturously slow making the teen's lower eyelid twitch. If he had to sit through one more minute of the teachers psychotic doom rant he would surely go insane, or at least more insane than he already was. The delayed click of the minute hand finally striking 3pm was quickly followed by a shrill ringing sound.

        "FINALLY!!!" Dib screamed, not caring who was staring at him as he rushed out of the classroom. He sprinted down the hall as students slowly began piling out of classrooms, and jumped over someone who was leaning over to pick up a dropped pencil. Everyone he passed looked behind him, expecting to see the odd green kid chasing after him angrily, but when they saw nobody they just shrugged and went on with their lives.
Short chapter is EPICALLY short. Deal with it..it's a transission chapter and really doesn't mean anything but oh well.
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HisFavoriteDarkAngel Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
O^e Prepare myself for this... *grabs tissues*
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ponyvilleraver Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
"FINALLY!!!" Dib screamed, not caring who was staring at him as he rushed out of the classroom.

hehehehe thats how i felt after my 4th study hall of the day :)

( my last term of school, i had already taken all my req. classes so i had 4 study halls every day)

oh and i looked up that song, i believe it's Lose It - by Atreyu
which is one of my fav songs, that i'v left on a repeat play list for the last 4 days straight, which has lead to some depressing poetry that will never see the light of day for fear people might get SUPER depressed)
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Kiatonasy Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012
Lol, I'm glad you've found a way to connect to my story, and thanks for reminding me about the song. Maybe no I'll get back into my muse for this story. :3
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ponyvilleraver Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012
your very welcome :) i love your work :) it makes me happy :D
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TomokoGirlAgain Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2011
that's it? but i wanna see what Dib's reaction is when he finds Zim's body.
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Kiatonasy Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011
Sorry this one just kind of died off in my mind, I have way too many stories going on and I need to drop some of them. Still trying to find out which ones to keep and which ones to drop, and just all of them haven't been updated for forever.
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Growlxthexdemon Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2010
*Looks closer at you* Im waiting for the next chapter...IM WAITING! *Gos Insane*

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At night....

:heart:..Yeah dude i glow...
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Kiatonasy Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2010
o.O Scary starey
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Growlxthexdemon Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2010
So will you? *Stares*
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Kiatonasy Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2010
Try to get the kiriban then you'll have your choice of which one I update next =D
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